Feedback from R1-16

-Really good/professional production logo
-We like the font and colour of the title because it represents the genre well.
-The semi-exsposure/overlay of the pocket watch and the money on the map is really good effect.
- The end surroundings dont fit with the beggining of the titles.
-the voice over is effective.

Voice over effected and sounded good.
good illusion with the map and the watch.
logo is good.

Feedback from R1-17

- Logo is abit small but looks good, funny how it moves.
- Really good how film overlays behind the map.
- Voice over works really well, came there isn't a soundtrack during library scene.

Feedback

- Good editing combining the 2 scenes with the coins and the compass.
- Pans across the map effectively.
- Voiceover worked well telling the story as well as pirate accent which was superb.
- Cheese can be good, but bit too much going on.
- Not enough Brad Chapman!

Final Cut

Evaluation

Our rough cut is not at the stage we would of wished it would be at this point in proceedings. Due to forgetting props there are missing images from the rough cut which will need to be added to the final piece. There is a small amount of fading in and out but no real special effects. We have achieved the voice over, but as a group we feel its to long and will need to be shortened. The logo at the start of the scene is to long, so like the voice over should be cut shorter.

Rough cut

Changes of inital ideas

We have decided to change our first ideas because we believe as a group that the panning of the map will become boring. To solve this problem we are going to show faded images and video on top of the map. Things like the pocket watch and someone playing with old money in there hands. Also the voice over goes on for to long so we have cut it in half to keep interest.